When I first began this comic, I had a slightly different approach to it.  The first 6 pages had more of a graphic novel feel to it, and I just wasn’t happy with the pacing, especially at the rate I was publishing it.  I decided to re-tool it and reformat what I had already done, but decided to keep the original version up here for curiosity’s sake. You’ll notice there’s a bit more environment and world-building in this version.  This would have been the way I would have done it had I released it as a complete and finished story at once, but at a page or two a week rate, I was finding that it was moving too slow.  Here then, is the first attempt, for the curious.